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I thought of a title for my attempt at poetry. A STEP TOWARD

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Love it! Keep going, keeping writing.

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An excellent poem. I thought I would try my hand at a poem as well. Not as good as yours but my valiant attempt.

A first step and then another

The road, the forest, the trail my witness

And like a breath of fresh air

I am airborne, I am reborn.

Kind Regards

Harish Mohabir

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Harish, I LOVE this poem especially this line— "I am airborne, I am reborn." Thank you for sharing... BRAVO!

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